NEVER MESS WITH THE NERD HE'S THE RACING GOD

The youth premise sounds intriguing.

I like the setup: Alan is mocked as a broke, awkward nerd and betrayed by his girlfriend.

“Alan is mocked as a broke, awkward nerd and betrayed by his girlfriend.” — that’s an interesting start.

The mix of Youth and Sports gives this story a distinctive feel.

That hook makes me curious about where the story goes: Alan is mocked as a broke, awkward nerd and betrayed by…

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